Aaron Furtado Baldwin, UE9006698 Wow that's a great About Comments for John Taylor, Esq.
I suggest this to save you a bunch of time and to help each individual profile tell their own story.
Just list the children on the mother and father's profiles. And leave any other information about that specific person in their About comments. You could provide the link to the children's geni profile if you want, but it isn't needed, since there is a link at the top to them. Typically, you would only need to add links, say, if you are referring to someone beyond those at the top, like you did so well with Roger Sherman, where it would be hard to go to them directly otherwise.
And then take all the info you include on the kids that you put in the father's About comments and paste it into their profiles -- since it is about them after all.
For example with daughter Jennet, you include all this interesting stuff about her on her father's profile, yet only have a link to Find a Grave on hers. Someone arriving at her profile, say, by coming from her husband's family, would not know to go to her father to find the info about her.
Also, I think the way you have the Find A Grave link at her profile is much better than taking the time to write the Find A Grave Memorial Number over the link. I don't know of anyone who is going to be at the Find A Grave site and then need to type in a memorial number to find them. Once they go to the link, they are already at the memorial and don't need the number. Plus, if the number ever changes due to a duplicate merge at FAG the link will follow to the new memorial number if that changes.
Have fun, Remember that most people don't want to read. For anything that you are retyping from some Document that you uploaded to the source file, you should just say "Refer to the document in the Source Tab". Less but more focused info in the About comment will help someone read it, AND most importantly, in the future if another profile is merged, it will also merge the About comments, and if yours part is concise and short, it will be easy to delete all the other that gets pasted in (unless it brings something new to the comments). You won't have to go through and edit in detail, you can quickly see if there is anything new, and if not, just copy the entire new info and hit delete. Quick and easy.
Also, it's minor but I find it important. I notice in all the "Confirmed Matches" attached to the profile (of father John Taylor, Esq.) is that some have the wife's name as Mildred instead of Margaret. If you can figure out why it is that, you can add that to her profile name. Maybe it is a middle name. But if you can't figure out why very easily, then add a note when first writing her name something like ...
wife Margaret Scott [sometimes found as Mildred for some unknown reason in MyHeritage profiles]
I personally would remove the "smart matches" that are wrong. But if you leave them, maybe let people know as they look at them that Mildred might not be her name, like
[sometimes found as Mildred for some unknown reason in the Smart Matches above]
Great work.